Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Great Expectation



The men sat on cement blocks facing the road, watching vehicles and people come and go, waiting for someone to make their day worthwhile. The market opposite them was gradually filing with up with buyers and sellers, the festive season was near. They had come with little or no expectation today because nothing happened yesterday. They had sat down for hours from dawn to late afternoon in hopes of a job. The few who came with little expectation had heard that two trucks laden with cement would arrive at the market today. Nafisat the food vendor approached them, a large stainless steel basin covered with polythene nylon on her head. Most of them ignored the aroma of her delicious pepper stew; they had eaten yesterday and had had no work to do, it made no financial sense to eat again this morning.
“I tell you, Mustapha swore he saw them at Ogere” one man said
“I wouldn’t believe Mustapha for a moment even if my life depended on it’ said another
“Whatever you believe, I know those trucks are coming, I got the information from a very reliable source” yet another man said
The argument continued until eventually half of them were convinced that the trucks were indeed coming. Three hours later, the hot sun burned their skins, the trucks had not yet arrived and the men were still waiting. Suddenly, someone saw from afar the two trucks, their hopes surged as they anticipated getting paid at the end of the day. There was a holdup though, so to pass time they quickly called on Nafisat to sell them some food.
Finally, the trucks came and pulled up in front of the market. The men drew near to them, hunger quenched, ready to finally work. The trucks were opened but alas, in them both were sheep! The men could not believe their eyes, where was the cement? How would they pay Nafisat? They looked on as the sheep were herded into the market and the clouds began to gather.    

5 comments:

  1. whao interesting.love this write, so logical,so real. keep it up my girl.

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  2. Nice. Want to know what happened next.

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  3. Lovely one Lola! Strong and lucid. The way flash fiction should be. Kudos

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  4. Thanks everyone, I truly appreciate your comments. Be sure to follow the blog for more! Ife, I see you *wink*

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